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Feb 12Liked by Samuel Lopez-Barrantes

Rapid read - want more from this world.

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Feb 12Liked by Samuel Lopez-Barrantes

Love this.

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Feb 12Liked by Samuel Lopez-Barrantes

The way this story weaves together themes of tragedy, intuition, and connection is incredibly powerful. Your ability to paint vivid scenes and evoke complex emotions makes it feel like we're right there alongside the characters, experiencing their journey firsthand.

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Feb 12Liked by Samuel Lopez-Barrantes

Beautifully done.

My first thought was “Wo Hop even has good fortune cookies.” It’s interesting what can hook a reader into a story, isn’t it?

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Feb 13Liked by Samuel Lopez-Barrantes

Damn. I really dug this.

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Feb 14Liked by Samuel Lopez-Barrantes

Yes! This just gets better and better as it goes along.

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founding

Love this tale. Weaving the soothsayer disaster dreams of the brother (familiar territory!) and the unfolding ecological chaos. Bravo! More!

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Feb 27Liked by Samuel Lopez-Barrantes

I'm not smart^^

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